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Welcome Speech to New Students [PERFECT 42/42]
Marks: ^21 + ^21 = 42 / 42 PERFECT (closest-pair adjusted) · PDF pp. 22–24
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Letter to Parents — Defending an HKAPA Acting-Career Application
Marks: ^19 M1 + ^13 M2 + ^20 D3 = 39 / 42 (closest-pair-with-D3) · PDF pp. 6–8
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Article — Working in Other Asian Cities: Concerns You Should Know (Q3, FOR graduates moving abroad)
Marks: ^20 + ^19 = 39 / 42 (closest-pair adjusted) · PDF pp. 8–10
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Photo Exhibition Captions — ‘My Memories’ (classroom + global-volunteer) [PERFECT 42/42]
Marks: ^21 + ^21 = 42 / 42 (PERFECT — both markers awarded the maximum) · booklet pp. 2–3
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Letter to the Editor — Coffee-Shop and Fast-Food Squatters
Marks: 21 + 18 = 39 / 42 · booklet pp. 7–10
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Information Leaflet — “852 Teen Art Club” (page 2)
Marks: 19 + 21 = 40 / 42 · booklet pp. 3–5 + standalone supp.
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Letter to the Editor — Coffee Shop & Fast-Food Long Stays
Marks: 20 + 18 = 38 / 42 · booklet pp. 7–10 + supps. S1 + S2
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Essay — Group Work in the Workplace (escalation ladder + MBTI + modular engineering remedies)
Marks: ^20 + ^20 = 40 / 42 (closest-pair adjusted; M1=16 dropped, D3=20) · booklet pp. 7–10 + extensive supp. S1
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School Magazine Article — “How I Strive and Thrive” (viral ‘Exam Cake’ video; ‘Ronald Roland’)
Marks: 20 + 19 = 39 / 42 · booklet pp. 7–12
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Complaint Email — Seaside Hotel manager (smoking on adjacent balcony + blocked ocean view)
Marks: 17 + ^20 + ^20 = 40 / 42 (closest-pair adjusted; M1 outlier) · booklet pp. 2–5
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