News Article — “Thirties… is the new Sixties?” (Hong Kong Daily; three-voice vox-pop lede)

The task: Question prompt — Q7 Learning English through Social Issues A survey found that the majority of Hong Kong people in their 60s would like to have the option to work past the retirement age of 65. In contrast, there is…

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